There's an art to describing your own work — and most high achievers are terrible at it. Here's what we coach our clients to do.
The people with the strongest O-1 cases are often the worst at describing what they’ve done. Not because their work isn’t remarkable — because they’ve spent years inside it, and everything extraordinary about it has become ordinary to them.
When we start working with a client, the first job isn’t pitching. It’s translation: getting them to talk about their work the way a journalist needs to hear it. Here’s what that involves.
Lead with the outcome, not the title. “I’m a senior researcher at X” tells a journalist where you sit. “My work changed how this procedure is done in forty hospitals” tells them why it matters. Titles are organizational facts. Outcomes are story material. Start with what happened because of you.
Be uncomfortably specific. High achievers generalize — “I led a team,” “I contributed to the project,” “we saw significant improvements.” A journalist needs the version with numbers, names, and consequences. What did you personally do? What would not have happened without you? The details that feel like bragging to you are the details that make the story credible.
Say what your work means, not just what it is. Experts describe process; readers need meaning. If your breakthrough matters, say who it matters to and why their lives are different. The attorney reviewing your case needs the word “achievements” on the page. The journalist needs to understand the achievement well enough to write about it convincingly. Same material, two audiences — give both what they need.
Stop burying the interesting part. Almost every client we’ve worked with mentions their most newsworthy detail as an aside — a throwaway line about the project that went sideways and got fixed, the result nobody expected, the fight to get something approved. That’s the story. The polished summary is the press release version. The aside is the feature.
Let it be a conversation, not a statement. The best material comes out when someone asks follow-up questions. That’s why real features involve real interviews, not questionnaires filled out alone at midnight. A good interviewer pulls out the specifics you’d never think to volunteer — because to you, they’re just how the work went.
This is learnable. It just isn’t natural, especially for people whose professional culture rewards understatement. But the gap between “I did good work” and a published feature about that work is almost entirely a communication gap — and it’s the one we close first, before a single pitch goes out.
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